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A brave new world
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A brave new world |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The First eyes to see the world Red blue green all over we place The lives we will trace into the sands of this place our new land over again a world and a friend For it will remain The stars are new names the world turns again and we are reborn In the light of new days Suns never shared worlds unprepared The new Earth Our old ways Bring forward new days the suns bitter glare singing our hair And all around is peace in still musty air Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This gives us something to think about. reminds me of a poem I did over 30 years ago, something like a new world. anyway this An interesting poem< !signature--> I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all over we place The lives we will trace into the sands of this place our new land over again a world and a friend For it will remain The stars are new names the world turns again and we are reborn In the light of new days --------- this is a very cool poem... I love its cryptic, celestial effect. mystical and melancholy, much like the poet  later gator, ~as always, Take Care,JM~ -------------- I know it's been a long road To get these towns behind me and I Will gladly reap what we may sow-- I am there for you ... and you're there for me ... Are you waiting for Heart in hand Woman and man See me where I stand I am Heart Heart in hand ~vertical horizon~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,...nice read. Especially liked the flow of it...feel that here you know? Interestingly thought provoking content....cool  |
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