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Evilkat88 Junior Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 37 |
I'm running but to where It's foggy and wet I smell the crisp cool air The darkness is cold The mudd and grass between my toes What's that noise, who are you Walking closer I start to see, you are just like me But that can't be You aresad and unhappy then I notice that you're just a mirror But you reflect what I feel kat99 |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It's sad in a way we sometimes wear those masks to hide how we feel and amaze ourselves when we 'see' our own sadness. Good poem ! |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
This is a wonderfully well done poem....it's beatiful and sad =] i love it. swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kat, Powerful words!! This is great writing....I love the mirror concept.....very creative!! Looking forward to more...  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yesss thisss is a grrrreat Poem. But I tend to stay away from mirrors, they crack whenever I'm around. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kat~ Sad and I see where you are coming from. We often do not show what we are really feeling inside do we  HUG Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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