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Count Your Fingers

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-05-03 08:39 PM

Count Your Fingers

Designed faces
reflect desires
the land of pillars
full of liars.
Tossed illusions
scatter dust in air
you dance his cold world
without a care.
He plays you like
a tuned violin
you reap him rewards
of mortal sin.
Count your fingers
as time stands alone
bet on the wrath
of ringing telephone.
You can't condone
the pimp man's choice cut
you can choose not
to become his slut.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-05-04 02:14 AM

yes we all have this choice.
very strong post, and a good poem.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 2000-05-04 07:37 AM

Joel: Thank you for reading and replying, This just kind of wrote itself it started and I had no idea where it was going till I got to the end and said what is this...LOL

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