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ashen
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 13


0 posted 2000-05-03 08:00 AM



Mouth dry, bitterness waiting to be replaced
Tears cry, happiness found again
Mind high, away from self-pitying strain
Soul fly, taking me far far away

Harshness tempted in
Clouds roll in the storm again
Dry air transcends
Acrid eporvescence rising

Drain me, too stupid to run away
Frame me, unconscious to the pain
Don't leave, I’m already stranded alone
Face me, deception inspite of the shadows

Rough smoothed clean
Tired of all the pain again
Idiotic revelry fame
Acrid exposure despondence

I didn't ask for this
Phasing in and out
Captured in empathetic self
Only acrid senses all around

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-03 09:01 AM


Christ: what flash backs. yes the empthic self, can take you for an acid ride.
well put.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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