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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-05-02 01:52 PM


The evil in his eyes
Goes way beyound compare
The coldness of his touch
And the burning of his stare
Take me into your arms
Draw blood from my veins
Show me how you will love me
As you take away my pains
Carress my body so softly
Run your hands through my hair
Do what you have to do
Just show me that you care
I do not care what happens
Its the attention that I crave
I long for some affection
For the memories I will save
Selling my soul to the devil
Is the least that I can do
To rid me of this painful life
So one day I wont be so blue
The thoughts of not being lonely
Is all that I can see
Not baring the daily pain
Of me being me!  



 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!



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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-03 01:36 AM


It would seem that you are a very giving person, willing to give up your very blood and soul?? I think the devel  would have too much on his hands. haha
This is a very dark poem and great all in one. I like it.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-05-03 12:01 PM


i can TOTALLY relate to this poem.  what a battle between our soul and our flesh.  you would think the affection would solve the problem... but it only returns when they leave out the door.  keep your head up, fellow poet.  it seems you are in the same dark dreary tunnel as i, and i see just a few shafts of light..... hang on!!!


kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

crayon
New Member
since 1999-12-10
Posts 7
singapore
3 posted 2000-05-03 12:22 PM


i would sell my soul to end it all...the loneliness.

yet sometimes...even after you have gave it everything you got...the pain still remains...you can fool yourself for so short a while that the pain the loneliness had really been taken away...because you wanted so much to believe it so.
it leaves you wanting more.
like hope.
leaves you wanting so much more.

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
4 posted 2000-05-03 01:05 PM


Hi Dark_kisses_Within,
Don't let yourself in that situation. Don't crave for attention or love as its a feeling thats shared freely and unconditionally. If someone doesn't like to do it with you believe that he doesn't deserve it and you'll find someone who'll show it really to you with out exacting some compensation. Believe it my dear and be strong.
(((((((hugs)))))))))))
A_L

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