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crayon New Member
since 1999-12-10
Posts 7singapore |
they put me on a stake. set me ablazed fire.ouch. you sauntered by you saw you smiled. beautiful angel you. you reached out your hand. i remember thinking thank you love. you plunged your claws straight into me twisted my heart twist and pull and squeeze and pull and twist. i writhed. charcoaled marshmallow;black and crispy on the outside yet tender and juicy inside burnt to perfection that'a how you like them. you sank your teeth and the warm sauce came flowing out i watched in awe you gulped and gulped. you threw the flaky dried out hide into the pile that was me you spat and pissed into the ashes that was me put out the fire and rescued me. thank you. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Whoa!!! Such vivid writing....great post. Could almost see you gritting your teeth while writing this....heehee...felt it all too much. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really like this!!! can't tell if you are truly thanking this person or being sarcastic!!! i like that!!! keep it coming!!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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crayon New Member
since 1999-12-10
Posts 7singapore |
=) thanx for the comments! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I'm with Kynder I can't tell if you want to kick this thing in the groin, or kiss them. great post. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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