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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-05-02 07:08 AM



A endless void
destroys corrupts
impurity raigns
all a cleansed in fire
see me all over
the darkness spreads
All we make we destoy
all we sow we reap
In me my love
the seed is set
In me my love
life death ends begins
hold me in darkness
Spread me out push me down
all is over me
Now is where all
Now is for all
The black hole
In you in me
its over
before it begun


  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-05-02 11:31 AM




lots of truth in this one...
seems man does destroy all he creates...
dark imagery here...
but I search for the light...
even in the black hole...
I can even find it in this poem *smile*
later-poet-gator  


 ~as always, Take Care,JM~
--------------
I know it's been a long road
To get these towns behind me and I
Will gladly reap what we may sow--
I am there for you ...
and you're there for me ...
Are you waiting for
Heart in hand
Woman and man
See me where I stand I am
Heart
Heart in hand
~vertical horizon~


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-05-02 08:38 PM


So true, but there is light every where.
As J.M. said reach for it.
very powerful poem.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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