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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-30 02:17 PM


A Soul to the Flame

To your light I fly
like a moth to a pyre
It’s passionate blaze
in it’s glory days
I longingly seek and desire

It’s now that I live
within your brighten glow
Some how coming
from your spirit,
with heart in tow.

It’s to your lips I seek
as you rock your head
in a mist.
Singing old melodies
touching me, touching you,
sweet bliss.

Within we seek
a release locked up.
Souls dance turning in play
to this long cherished cup,
ecstasy please take away.

Finding this union more
than mere mortals could stand.
Our spirits take flight
to a place our bodies
would never command.

Seeking this feather like touch
flying to close to the flame.
I burn within this heat
like a moth to the pyre
a soul to the flame.

To My (White Dove)
Joel

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-04-30 09:23 PM


~Within we seek
a release locked up....Joel..you and your  patience are the key.  This is beautiful.  

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-04-30 09:26 PM


God bless those glory days!
you are showing the signs of a true romantic!
who could possibly resist this?
She doesn't stand a chance!

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-30 09:56 PM


Today Sunday/30. I took White Dove to the river before she had to work, we swam I held her, we laughed, it was good.
Her flying circle lowers.
Thank you Ladies, I'm embarassed!
  
And very happy  
love you both.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-04-30 09:59 PM


YES!!

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com



AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-05-01 08:54 AM


good work...
i loved the last verse

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-05-01 09:00 AM


Joel this was the most beautiful thing and I see you're making progress keep up with the patience thats the key that unlocks the heart  
Very special poem Joel
Luv Tracie~

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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