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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
Devote Devote Devoting my life To an endless smile Seek Seeking a way To smile and disobey Feel Feel the wind As it brushes skin Smell Smell the sin As we all grin Come to our side and be my friend Your passion will get you in If you die on the way You will only cement your legacy Hear Hear a Heart That beats for you Love Love a man Who does not understand Grieve Grieve for me If you ever leave Believe Believe in us Though I’m not much Take me with if you say no What could hurt if I don’t know To die alone would be your loss I am always with you every river we cross |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well Len I just don't know what to say, OH, ok hear it is the poem is wonderful, it is odd, and I like that in poems, to do the different and from the heart. And what do you mean "Though I’m not much" Pick up your head, you are so much worth, And your writing say's all that. "What could hurt if I don’t know" Do you want that answer? your soul. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes it just plain hurts to love someone this much... Excellent poem. Michael |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey Len, I just noticed you had been posting your poems in both Dark and open. I should let you know it is against forum policy to post the same poem in two "active" forums. I would ask you to please limit your posts to one forum or the other in the future. Thank you, Michael |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem.. i liked it If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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