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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-04-28 09:15 PM

Before man was born, almost before history,
In a world made of magic and mystery,
Gods, Titans, evil and foes,
Wanting to possess but throw no stones.

Zeus with the power of all by his side,
Zeus became the ruler of them all.

Weird creatures never seen before,
The Gorgon and the Mantacor,
The Centar, the cyclops too,
A different world from that of me and you.

They were nature, the rulers of all,
Their will goverened everything,
A better world they wanted to see,
Where Mortals and Gods could sing in harmony.

And Zeus descended from the sky,
With lightning by his side,
A love like thunder in his heart,
To take a mortal bride.

And from that union came a son,
Half human and half God,
With twice the strength of mortal man,
To walk where hero's tried.

With that son among the living,
Zeus hoped he'd be the one,
To unite all mortals with the Gods,
His special, amazing son.

He also taught the gods,
That there is more to being human than acting brave and strong,
That's it's listening to your heart,
And knowing when you're wrong.

He taught both Mortals and God's,
The things they needed to know,
So Men and God's could live together,
They could at last, love, learn and grow.

And that is the song of the God's,
To unite one and all,
To watchover mankind,
And be there when they call.

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-04-29 01:29 AM

Excellent tale my friend...

Quite wonderfully woven...and very well told. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-04-29 01:43 AM

No I have to disagree, not one of my best works. Not excellent, but glad you liked it anyways, Sven

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-29 06:58 AM

ISIS...
love the imagery in this and the mythology theme,
and the rhyme was perfect...made the poem.
very creative and imaginative.
take care jm

ps..thanks for that cool Email with the download..very cool

Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-04-29 12:15 PM

Is not that passionate strength in us all?
I think so.
Great work kid. haha
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-04-29 06:15 PM

Thanks guys!

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-04-29 07:08 PM

Isis~
This I found very enjoyable to read, loved the imagery also

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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