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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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When I listen to your voice When I look in your eyes I feel something magical all over my body I can't help but want you near me I try so hard to not let myself love you Once I give in to loving you I get scared cause I can't handle how much you mean What if I told you I loved you And you didn't answer What if you told me and I froze And said nothing to you Either way one of us will be hurt Unless we both are truly in love Then all is well What the chance of that?? -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Don't doom a relationship before you have explored all the possibilities hon. Enjoy the love and newness, the now... What happens, happens and none of us have the power to change that.. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhh yes... but sometimes we just have to take the chance... another very well written piece by you. I'd say someone is inspiring you quite nicely  great work Neala, take care, jm Is it too much to find an answer, Is it too much to hold you close. Is it too much to find a reason, Is it too much to free my soul -- From self control ... And I know you're always waiting for me ... You take me far away, And I know you're holding me ... And it's better now ... ~vertical horizon~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It is in our nature to mate. That means to open up. Wolfs roll on to their backs to expose their bellies, the most venerable parts of life, offering their ?? all. This is a natural thing. Expressing your fears here is great well written, from the heart. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
While everyone else is telling you that we have to the risk, I have to agree with your fears. I have found the one that I love, but am not sure of his feelings, so I cannot tell him I love him. I am afraid that we may both be hurt if I were to say that. And, I refuse to hurt either of us in that manner. So, I can see where you are coming from. Nice writing!!  "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest." -William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey listen to your heart and go with it, you may be pleasantly surprised at the outcome but you won't know unless you give it a go  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thanks everyone for the reply you don't know what it means to have people understand where your comin from. -Neala (Goddess Of Sadness) |
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