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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-28 05:10 PM


8 Years
so many tears
so much mistrust and grief
another failed marriage
and all my love disparaged
she`s the wicked queen
not the woman that she seems
her masks are many
a myriad lot
though she seems to be
a friend she`s not

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amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-04-28 05:52 PM


hi
having been in a friendship for 8 yrs  and still she's playing some sorta game!
Just throw her outta mind and find someone who's worthy of your love and trust.
sincerely
A_L

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-29 11:24 AM


my friend I went 20 years, the last 5 without physical contact, I stayed true.
It was a hard lesson, so much time lost, so much love lost.
Only you can tell your values,
And ask some questions.
Is she worth it?
Is the wait worth it?
Is the game worth it?
Only you can answer this.
I really wish you good luck in your answers.
Let us know.
My heart to you my friend.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-29 08:15 PM


Soo sad, words fail me i'm not sure what to say to you, just know that I care HUG
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-04-29 10:06 PM


I can sense this deep pain and my heart goes out for you. Having been left at the altar,  lost one to war (Vietnam)
and recently, a friendship soiled, I know pain...
God bless

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com



kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-05-02 03:24 AM


excellent work here.  been a while. thanks for posting.

still your friend
kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

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