navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Pacified
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Pacified Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396


0 posted 2000-04-25 11:47 PM


Pacified

The gathering of emotions
rushing in
taking over me
reacting to pain
to things and times that seem a certain way
exposing my vulnerability
to people I'd hoped thought I was so strong
shedding light on a side I hid for so long
in deseperation I attacked you
17 times in a row
emotional attacks too noisy to understand
to hear you or want to
control forgotten
sight darkened by the sound
eyes tightly closed I felt you there
warm arms around me
heaven sent and soothing
you took it all away
you pacified me there
long deep breaths of emotional energy
drained from a confused soul
heart feeling peaceful and relieved
you pacified me.........
you did.



© Copyright 2000 SpitFire - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-04-26 07:21 AM


this was good, and when we're only pacified, we still hunger don't we?

 Kathleen



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-27 12:32 PM


long deep breaths of emotional energy
drained from a confused soul
heart feeling peaceful and relieved
you pacified me.........
you did.
"God how I know these words well"
this hits to close to home for me kid.
Thanks for the burning ember.My heart to you kid.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-27 08:38 PM


This is..simply..wonderful.  So true right now, gosh I don't know what to say but wow....much needed right now.  

Thanks

Daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Pacified

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary