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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-04-25 11:44 PM


The troubled air still rages,
I can stand it no more!
My senses are shaken, my soul driven to maddness,
I won't take it anymore!

When my whirlwind of fury descends on you,
You're last uttered word a prayer,
Think of all you did,
You didn't play fair!

Your sin has trapped you,
Revealed your true self,
You sail rejoicing in your flood of death,
No more my woes are put to shelf.

Wretched soul come to me,
Trust me one last time,
Let me have my way with you,
Come, this one last time.

Beguiling blue eyes, long golden hair,
There must be love in there somewhere?
Lay down my spirit upon the bed,
Rest that ever weary head.

I'll seduce you this one last time,
The metamorphisis overtakes me,
My killing fangs sink into your neck,
My revenge, your death, tis only what you did to me.


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-04-26 01:24 AM


Isis,
     it would seem that you want to attack the rage with all of your rage. . . sometimes, we have to do what we have to do. . . for our own survival. . .

Wonderful words, my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-04-26 01:42 AM


great work Isis...
the last verse is so aggressive....
well your work and variety always surprises me...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-26 07:25 AM


WOW WOW WOW
Im awake now !!!
Lisa...this is AWESOME!!!
this is so powerful and hardhitting.
So extrememly well written.
You have expressed your emotions here
like a force of nature...
like a slap of reality.
this is one of your best!!!!
outstanding work.
Look out world Isis is kickin some serious butt!!  
very cool poem...take care sweets, jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-26 07:01 PM


Thanks everyone!!
Janet Marie, glad you liked it so much  
Avanti, variety is the spice of life  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-27 01:01 AM


Sinking teeth into flesh now your talking my language. Let me have some, plerrrrase...
Damn this snout. haha
I like tha aggression, the hate comes out, it's just damn it we can't shed light all the time, then we would be false prophets.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-04-27 06:52 PM


I dislike anger and hate, but hey, sometimes we all have it  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
7 posted 2000-04-27 07:59 PM


WOW!!  This is great....and also a very safe way to vent the anger without any of the physical consequenses!! I've found that it's also more "rewarding" to write these feelings down than it is to take the step to lash out in person...for the results that we hope for are often not what we expect.  To wrap this reply up....   ..this was a great piece which I enjoyed and it gave me reason to pause and think.< !signature-->

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 04-27-2000).]

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