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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-25 10:55 PM


I am tired of all the fighting
This situation needs new lighting
But it won't change
We are out of each other's range
Nothing new will come
Not even some

So I now surrender
My heart is tender
From the beating I took
Was once an open book
This chapter is through
Know it is true

No need to look back
Time to start to pack
I will begin again
Forget where we have been
Focus on what's ahead
Will be living not dead

The future is mine
This is my time to shine
Anything will go
No tears for you will flow
I have cried my last
For a love that has passed

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-04-25 11:22 PM


~Good for you....right on!!! Glad you made it this far... I loved this.
AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
2 posted 2000-04-26 01:54 AM


well written i know the feling and i understand...
and i'm gald that you've cried you last tear...
got places to go so no time to frown...
well written...
see ya around

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-26 09:32 AM


This was very intense, I loved that power it had to it....
The future is mine
This is my time to shine
Anything will go
No tears for you will flow
I have cried my last
For a love that has passed...
Way to go...
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-04-26 11:40 AM


SpitFire....Thank you!!!  Yes, I have made it this far.  Won't technically be over for a while, but as far as I'm concerned it is done.  Cannot love someone who loves another.

AVANTI...thanks.  No time to cry.  Know this is what's best for me.  Sorry you know the feeling so well.

Tracie...I felt powerful writing it!!  Thank you for the kind words.  Not an easy time in my life, but know the time has come to focus on what can be instead of what will never be.  Deserve someone who will love me, not lie to me.  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2000-04-26 02:44 PM


Very very nice writing.  Simple yet to the point. I liked  ALOT!  It takes a strong person to move on and well.... it seems like you did it !! YEAH!!!  Congrats to you.

Dark_kisses


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!


Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-04-26 04:48 PM


Dark Kisses,
Thank you and glad you liked it!!  I am in the process of moving on and out.  Found an inner strength I didn't even know I had.  Just want to put it all behind me.  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-04-26 06:56 PM


I see lots of inner strength and determination in this poem...I have been going thru some battles and it definately helps the situation to take a position of strength...to let go of the sadness or failures of the past...and to take hold of your destiny for today and tomorrow.  Not an easy battle but one that can be won.   James
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
8 posted 2000-04-26 07:41 PM


James....Yes, I have found the strength and determination to do what has to be done.  You are right, it is the best position.  Hope you win your battles.  Looking to the future now....no time to be sad.  Today, omorrow, and always!!  No not easy at all, but yes it can be won and will.  Thank you!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
9 posted 2000-04-26 08:55 PM


My furry friend I really feel for you, I do.
This time in your life you could have done without, only if you could have the lesson without so much pain. They seem to run hand in hand. But you have picked a power totem, the wolf, she is strong, a queen of the night that's where all the passions matialize in the night.  I truly hope you find a mate that has as much passion and strength to match yours, and someone that will hold up there end of a love.,, of a true love.  Be well.  I'll howl for you tonight.
Joel the Wolf.   "Hoooowwwwlllll"

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
10 posted 2000-04-26 09:19 PM


My furry friend,
I think you have one walked the path that I am walking.  Yes, I could have done without the pain, but would I have learned the lesson so well??  You got it, the wolf gives me strength to draw from.  Have always loved them and felt drawn to them in a way.  She has a passion and power like no other.  Thank you so much for the kind and comforting words, Joel.  Really does help.  I too hope I can find a mate to match my power and strength....of a true love....unlike no other.  Howl away, wolf brother.  I am listening!!  
Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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