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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-25 10:52 AM




I knew it was too good to be true.
People never come through as they should.
I can't even tell if the truth is
Still in your eyes.
Used to be my last resort,
Stumbling through your maze of lies.

My heart is thumping,
Emptiness echoing through my chest,
Or is it pain,
My uninvited, frequent guest?

My mind is racing,
Constantly berating me-
"Never should have listened!!!  How could you
believe what he professed?  Time always tells,
track history always fails the biggest test!!"

So this is what I get for giving in,
Once again.
Angry, sad and confused,
Beaten, bleeding and bruised.
For what would seem the rest of my life.
Can't help but blame myself,
I'm the one who let him in,
Once again.


*****kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-25 05:16 PM


It seems our brains go south and our hearts cry out unheard.  When we let them back into our lives. Will the lesson never be learned.

this is a very well written poem, it stayed with the subject, and had a heartfelt dance to it. in one word, " Great "
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kristi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33
Yulee, FL
2 posted 2000-04-26 12:29 PM


Great job!  "can't help but blame myself, I'm the one who let him in" , no way girl!  It's always HIS fault!!
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-04-27 09:10 AM


~You let him in,....now show him the way out.  Please,...for yourself..for everything you have to give to others who care and love...and for all the learning and experiencing you have to do.  Do it for you...for your growth in this world.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-04-27 09:54 AM


i really appreciate your replies and thoughtful words!!!  thank our good Lord, i have escaped the trap i had set for myself.  read my post My Day at the Beach!!!!! hahahah
love you all more than you will ever know.


love, kynder
Psalm 27

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
5 posted 2000-04-27 01:58 PM


Hi Kynder
Be sure when ever you get into some relationship. It takes time to develop confidence and if the other person is just foolin around just chuck him out as he doesn't deseve you.
Sincerely
A_L

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