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Impassionate Eyes |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia 
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I never thought I could hate you Never dreamt I could watch with impassionate eyes the blood slowly seep from your soul and as the last drop trickles onto the ground I turn And walk away "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Tess, to gain this impassionate eyes what do I have to do? I have not reached this level yet, to watch the blood drop the last. She is still in my heart. ----------------------------------- This is a very powerful statement, one that takes strength, and courage. To watch the blood of a friend (lover) drain from your heart. A good expression in the statement. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Such strength in your words,...I like this. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Ooooooooooooooooooooo...... have I ever felt like this before!! Thank you for the guts to share the way you really have felt. Isn't it the truth that sets us free????? Well, I am still waiting....hope your freedom comes soon too. Thanks for a step in the right direction! |
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kristi Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 33Yulee, FL |
Illusion said it all. I really enjoyed this! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tess~ Great piece, very passionately stated. Way powerful  Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Ouch...the person this is aimed at must have done something really bad. I don't think I am strong enough to ever reach that level, a downfall of mine..to trusting. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Joel the wolf - It's taken a long time for me to get to that stage, and with some people you never do. There are some who I think always stay in your heart. This person forced the issue to this point of no return. Spitfire Thanks Illusion - yes sometimes it just seems so harsh when you say stuff like this, and I must admit it's not often I feel this way ! Kristi and tracie Thanks for your comments Dhuron yep well l was always very trusting too. I don't think you have to get to this point. It was just that at that time, that was the way I felt |
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