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Dark Poetry #1

Evidence

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-04-23 10:59 PM

                    ~Evidence~

               Stupid lipstick stain
                    on the glass
                     Evidence
                     You leave
               You remain in pieces-
                Where you once were
               bits of your existence
                scattered in a world
              where noone cares anyway.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-24 01:40 AM

The lip stick gives it away.
But the lip stick she left me I still crave.
My post a week ago called "lip print"
You have been doing great with your post, very heartfelt.
This is A so to speak howler.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-04-26 09:07 AM

Loved this, fantastic read reminded me of Joels poem Lip print it was fantastic as well.
Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Tess
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

3 posted 2000-04-26 11:32 AM

Well I didnt read joels lip print poem, so I may have to search it out!
But I did like this one.
The smallest things are sometimes those that strike the biggest chord inside our hearts.
Great work!

"Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-27 08:33 PM

Great Poem here, heartfelt.

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