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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
You will skim the pages Your heart will drop like tears You will feel the absence Cry over the loss that had to be lost The tears will trickle Habitual tears Everyday you'll fight the day Smile the fake smile you've grown into Share your thoughts only you understand Looks like you hit your funny bone again Bipolar Beheaded Behaved Excruciating pain to the mind Silence to Solace Solace to Words Words to Think Thinking to Cry Crying because you know no other way Continue to wish Continue to miss Missing those who can't exist Teaching your soul how to swallow life And not to die in the process It's possible You could die one day Just cause he said so Master in command Band-aids for your hurts Blankets for your frozen heart Shadows to console the burning eyes |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hooray,...I love the way this one was written, great job...had a great flow to it...I loved the sense I got of you just letting it all out. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Spit is right, this has a great flow, very strong. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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