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Feeling Her Sighs

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Dark Enchantress
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meet Morgana


0 posted 04-23-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

A black raven
flying high over
the misty cloud
weaved in throughout
the green blanket of trees
Calm and still,
the forest softly sighs

A slight chill the air,
yet strangely comforting
and understanding
of my darkend solitude

I pull my small blanket
tighter around me,
feeling the cold, damp earth
beneath my bare feet
as I walk out into
the enchanted realm

So distant from everything,
opening it's arms to me
allowing me to rest
in this gentle sanctuary


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~

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AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE


1 posted 04-23-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

very well written...
great work...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao
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2 posted 04-23-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I like where this takes me.....great job with it....it is eerily comforting.
Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp


3 posted 04-23-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

In the hill above me, about 45min. there is a small lake, called Utica, no power boats allowed, I go at least five times a year, it has got to be the most perfect description of this.
Thank you so much for taking us there.
and so well.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
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...in my boxers...


4 posted 03-23-2002 08:10 PM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

Jaime,

I loved this one. Perhpas because I can relate... solotude is priceless for me these days.... a place to go and be along, and think. There is peace there. Or at least comfort. You bring the story from it's start to it's ending (perhaps another beginning?) splendidly. Another enjoyed read.

~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
         ~ The Night Owl

GlisteningRain
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The clouds


5 posted 05-06-2004 10:52 PM       View Profile for GlisteningRain   Email GlisteningRain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GlisteningRain

Whisked away into place where only solace and tranquility are soft but harsh with biting cold aginst my feet...waiting for nothing. You gave so much imagery. I loved it.

sincerely,
B
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