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DarkAnjl
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-04-22 10:43 AM


I walk a lonely road only for me.
I don't want for anything except to be free.
I can't let you close, I just cannot trust.
I won't let it happen, my heart would just bust.
I live with my pain a great part of my soul.
Without it I'm lost, something other than whole.
I don't understand why the pain hurts so deep.
It's something inside me that I'll always keep.
I try to find peace, and end to my plight.
I guess there is nothing, just my will to fight.
So, I'll walk down that lonely road accepting my pain.
As tears of helplessness fall from my eyes like the rain.            


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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-04-22 11:01 AM


~I could so see you walking that road,...great post.  Pick your head up
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 2000-04-22 11:07 AM


Alas, I walk the same path.  Never lose that will to fight, for through all the tears, you will prevail.

Michael

Welcome to Dark Passions, btw.


Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

3 posted 2000-04-22 01:57 PM


Nice poem, I too walk that troubled road.
TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
4 posted 2000-04-22 03:49 PM


Welcome...beautiful start to a great stay! I too walk that road...but one day we shall grow wings and fly away...from that troubled road.

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

DarkAnjl
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17

5 posted 2000-04-22 05:36 PM


Thank you all very much. I appreciate your kind words.  I am glad to have some place to put the words that I feel. And Thank You Michael Im glad to be here.
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
6 posted 2000-04-22 06:25 PM


Hey sis!!! Wonderful post hun....sounded like it was coming directly from me...I swear we're like from the same mold! Well you found words for the emotions that I have been messing with for quite some time...and an excellent job you did.  

              Lotta Love & Stay Strong!
                      Pandora
( lol...you remember when I was called that? Way back in the day...anywayz...See ya laterz!)


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-04-23 01:24 AM


You guy's are just to fast for this old wolf.
this poem My friend is great, this road path. is traviled by us all. you are not alone.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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