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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-04-22 10:39 AM


Alone in my popularity,
distant in my screams,
life seemed simple, a kids dream.

Sunny day, kites fly high,
smell of grass,
emerald sky,
Scan horizon,
clouds of rain,
anvil nimbus,
foundry of pain.

I won't run,
I can't hide,
Storm I see, rages inside.
Thunder groans, lightning hits the spot,
nerves electrified, forget it not.

Blitzkrieg on life,
Knocked me to the wet grass,
cold, tired, my hell has passed.
Look again, horizon blue,
angelic clouds,
cotton faces of you.

-Rich-

(for Serenity  )

© Copyright 2000 RJEHKing - All Rights Reserved
DarkAnjl
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17

1 posted 2000-04-22 10:45 AM


My God I Loved this poem. Your words are very touching and full of insight. Wonderful!!!
TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-04-22 03:57 PM


This poem went so fast...it almost has a melody...sweet and sad...

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-04-22 04:45 PM


~Sounds like you made it...hurray!!!
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-23 12:52 PM


VerrrrY Gooood my friend.
Cotton faces of you. Misty.
and good.
Joel.



 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-23 12:56 PM


WoW.. this was fantastic and I enjoyed it very much.  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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