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Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-04-21 12:48 PM


  What did I do to deserve this?
I have done them no wrong...
  They berate and criticise me,
when there is nothing to criticise
or berate about me.
  They do not have the confidence
to beleive in themselves, so they
pick on me. What an irony, because
I feel that they have things I want.
  I hope someday that I might find
the peace I wish for.
  

© Copyright 2000 Kurly - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 2000-04-21 02:45 PM


Great poem Kurly! You just have to stay true to yourself and learn to be happy with who you are. Ignore them and they'll leave you alone. The force is with you my friend. lol...ignore me...I'm really hyper right now. But anywayz...excellent poem!

Btw - Welcome to Dark Passions!

             Yours truly,
                Angel


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-21 02:58 PM


~I loved this poem.  And here it tells of such the truth that people that belittle others are really not happy with themselves...which in turn,  makes them feel a bit better to put others down.  I too hope that you find your peace.
MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
3 posted 2000-04-21 03:02 PM


I'm glad I got the chance to read that. It was great.

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-21 03:11 PM


Wonderful Poem Kurly,

Oh does this tell the Tale of my Junior High years...stay strong and you'll find peace.  Hang in there.


Daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-21 09:38 PM


Wishful thinking my friend, but peace and freedom's an ilussion.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

sweetchild
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37

6 posted 2000-04-22 03:14 PM


Such an honest veiw of things. Good poem. I hope you find that peace.
DarkAnjl
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17

7 posted 2000-04-22 05:45 PM


Well you don't know me Kurly but I do believe fully in the fact that you WILL find peace . I think your poem is wonderful. I know how it feels to be in that place.
Anjl

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2000-04-23 09:32 AM


Sadly I relate to this well, I don't understand why poeple have to do this. Those who do this are obviously not happy and have to make others unhappy as well and they get enjoyment out of it  
~HUG~
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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