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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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0 posted 2000-04-20 08:52 PM


~A Bus Ride~

A bus ride for the groceries
in the heat of the summer sun
counting change
counting tears
evil stares
a bus ride for your temporaries
those thoughts that linger
windows fogged
blurry streets
steaming bodies in plastic seats
a weeks worth of food
of life
paper or plastic?
two blocks from safety
from society's hatred...
a bus ride for the groceries.


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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-20 11:50 PM


Welcome to Passions and the Dark Forum SpitFire.  Good first post, looking forward to future postings.

Welcome again

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


SpitFire
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2 posted 2000-04-20 11:54 PM


~Thanks for the welcome!!!  
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-04-21 02:06 AM


SpitFire~ Welcome!   (great name ) what a very vivid picture you have painted here.......I like.....I like   -SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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4 posted 2000-04-21 02:57 AM


hahaha you did it again. hahaha
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
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5 posted 2000-04-21 04:32 AM


man it is great to read something i could actually still smell on my skin.  i should own stock as many bus rides i done took.  and may i ask, are you the same spitfire that goes to the highway#--0?  if so, i'm greeneyedgirl.....  WELCOME!!!!!

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

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