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The light I see

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xEmperorEmber
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0 posted 04-20-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for xEmperorEmber   Email xEmperorEmber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit xEmperorEmber's Home Page   View IP for xEmperorEmber

Stumbling through a sunny day
Waiting to relax the fake expressions on my face
These are the prices i pay
Heaven sent penalties thoughtfully given for having faith

If a best friend is always there
Then I just reunited with depression
As well as Dispair
Fully rested from a peaceful remission

Give me solace its the ultimate fix
Put my mind at rest
I will dig out of my pit
Or maybe this is all for the best

I am locked in myself
And i should have swallowed the key
I am trapped with no help
Lost completely in me

No hope, no light, everything just swell
nothing to contrast with my dim soul
other than the light of hell
The one thing that keeps me from being cold

© Copyright 2000 Paul Watley - All Rights Reserved
dhuron
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1 posted 04-20-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

xEmperor,

This is painfully wonderful work.  Feelings and pain pouring from this as a waterfall to a lake.  "The light of hell, The one thing that keeps me from being cold"

that is a very Powerful statement, Hope all this changes in time.

dhuron

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dark Enchantress
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2 posted 04-20-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Hey Ember,
Wonderful poem...
written very well...
I hope you feel better soon...
and remember...
you'll always have me.


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Joel the wolf
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3 posted 04-21-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

No hope, no light, everything just swell
nothing to contrast with my dim soul
other than the light of hell
The one thing that keeps me from being cold

I feel this light of hell now and it does keep me warm.
Good works here.
Thanks for the read.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 08-30-2005 01:22 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

The light from 2000.  So I guess you've been posting for quite sometime.  And its very dark indeed.

-GIS

Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes

 
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