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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2000-04-20 03:18 AM


~~~ Oke, oke, so it's not dark but I still wanted to share it with you guys. So enjoy! Or don't...lol..but I hope you will.   ~~~


Small rays of sunlight
shine in through the blinds
A hazy glow settling in the room,
weighing in the laziness of the day
There's no where else I'd rather be
than lying here close to you,
in our silken kingdom of pillows and sheets
Gentle silence washing over us,
growing louder as your hands explore
the length of my skin
I could spend forever here
and never wish to leave
I'll be completely satisfied
as long as you're here with me



 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



© Copyright 2000 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-04-20 09:46 AM


What a wonderful place to be.  I would never want to leave either. Beautiful, soft words.  Thanks for sharing.

Michael

Joel the wolf
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2 posted 2000-04-21 01:46 AM


Sounds good to me.
I mean that.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 2000-04-21 03:02 AM


Thank you both very much for your replies.  

 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Kurly
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4 posted 2000-04-21 12:17 PM


Nice poem, I wish I had that!
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5 posted 2002-04-09 02:41 AM




There's not much else to say. A splendid write. *grins* I really enjoyed this one. You took a subject that could easily have been turned raunchy, annoying, of misshandled into something beautiful. A wonderful write, as usual.

~
Mon Verite

"Tesous Christos, Theou Uios, Soter"

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