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HelenaJ
Member

since 2000-04-04

Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-04-18 11:26 PM

These walls
My only source of companionship
They keep me close
Tightening
Closing in
Muted from the world
Kept beyond reach
Escape smothered by
their strength
Muffled cries
Heard by no one
Seen by no one
Enter no one
Given up on freedom
Almost happy with the
suffication
Knowing the pain would be
far worse beyond
these walls

The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-04-19 12:26 PM

i can't get enough of your imagery and your "way with words". you sound just like me. it takes serious climbing equipment to get over my walls. and who said i wanted to climb anyway?

hahahaha!!!
love your work more!!! hahaha

*****kynder

quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-04-19 02:05 AM

Also within your walls is a dimension, that time, space and love, know no bounds.
And yes the pain is far worse, but so is the life far better. think about it...
Love your work kid.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2000-04-19 07:11 AM

I live behind my own "self built" walls. Truly I can relate to the companionship walls offer. Everytime I've dared to look beyond them a far greater pain has taken me. Great depiction.

Michael

kittyj
Junior Member

since 2000-04-17

Posts 32
CANADA

4 posted 2000-04-19 08:52 AM

The walls are closing in on me
and time is running out
pain mounting all around me
walls heaving from the burden
faces within
taunting me, teasing
trying to get in
* * * * *
I had nothing to say today, yet your words trigger my brain. Thank you soul sista.

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