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love lost...... |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Woman, don't you see, the pins you stick in me, Walls go up, knock me down to the floor I'm the stranger you want no more. Lend an ear, lend a buck, Am I the one who's outa luck, fall in love, fall apart, smash my tinsel heart, looks that kill, touch that maimes, hair that moves like flames. I dont want much, but have all to give, Someone to love, somewhere to live, Woman! you smashed my heart, damage done- time for us to part, thoughts of the night before watched you walk through that door, to another man, another time, no longer loved, never mine.... Treated you bad, you bruised my face, lost my love, feel a disgrace, Silence falls on the phone, god! I feel so alone. Now the days just go by...... -Rich- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The ending is the sum of all things. Here. A good one you have here. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly welcome to the Dark Forum Slashed Soul, I haven't welcomed you previously.. The days just go by... aimlessly... I know.. I like what you said and the finishing line sums it all up for me. Good work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Perhaps you should vandalize something of hers! Just kidding. It's not right to seek revenge. Though there are times It would have made me feel better! Well done Helena The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Good Post Slashed, As Joel said the ending is the sum of all things.... some pass quickly others painfully slow... Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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