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eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-04-18 01:32 PM


Shortly After Midnight
into your room I go
And stand there gazing down at you
with eyes that love you so
Your head upon the pillow
your arms down at your side
your lips in faint smile
then next to you I slide

I kiss your eyelids softly
run fingers through your hair
I feel your breath upon me
do you know I'm there?
I put my arms around you
and hold you, oh so dear
I whisper of my love for you
Although you cannot hear

I cherish ever moment as
I hold you close, my dear
for times goes by so quickly
and morning's almost near
Tho' you won't know that I've been there
with you throughout the night
My love for you is ever close..
as darkness is to light

© Copyright 2000 eegood - All Rights Reserved
HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
1 posted 2000-04-18 11:42 PM


This is my favorite time to be with someone.
Sweet words.Loved it

helena

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-19 01:55 AM


I have talked to my love many nights while she lay sleeping, saying my heart to her.
And leaving long before she awakes.
She say's she dreams of my voice. How little she know's. But that ant bad.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-04-21 06:54 AM


This is so smooth and beautiful...seems to be a song.   James
isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

4 posted 2000-04-21 11:56 AM


Its a beautiful  to know that someone can be so close to someone and love them like that. Its a great poem.
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-22 12:23 PM


Touching, passionate and beautiful~
Sweet poem, loved it very much.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
6 posted 2000-04-22 12:28 PM


Perfect poem of love! Excellent job on expressing these deep feelings. Thanx for sharing.

Peace


 I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 2000-04-22 08:06 AM


Oh, I caught chills reading this.  A most excellent work here.  Kudos.


Michael

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