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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
so you go, and you know this is it this is really it and you hide on buildings that kiss the sky i'm on the ground hanging out with shadows below _________________________________________________ *sorry this is so short, my brain is left of centre today. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
You say this is short, but it say's a lot. To me anyway. Making a decision in life seems to be our biggest problem, but you started out with a deffinet, “So you go" I could go on but I'll leave it up to my friends, just one thing what the hell are you going to think about on the way down? hahahaha Joel. maybe you could HHHHOOOOWWWWLLLL. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Short sure, but full of pain, well written. Sometimes the simpliest poems are the most poignant  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Short and sweet just like it's author. I love it j. j.l. |
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