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Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA

0 posted 2000-04-18 09:34 AM


An endless road flowing behind as if blood from myself, when will it stop?
I look behind me and see the porcline snowflakes falling onto my dark path
Looking back onto you there is one peacful tear upon your hopeful cheek
Rivers rushing from behind me pushing...forcing me to leave you faster and faster
One last kiss to keep my dreams on my lips
Sometimes I wonder if that is why I am still alive
I shall never forget this true savior true hero
Only one shed tear
Eyes gray and tired...when will this hateful road end?

Years later I look back onto my most tragic road that once drove me into insanity and hiding my true self
Only one tear falls in memory of yours...just tell myself to be strong
You have changed I have too...I am stronger and I no longer am being forced down a bloodstained road into certain death
I stand my ground I shall no longer be washed away by the dark river...it has met its match



 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-18 09:43 AM


God I have traveled this path before.
moving. strong finis.
Joel.< !signature-->

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-18-2000).]

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
2 posted 2000-04-18 11:22 AM


I too followed close behind.
Still I find myself on the same road time and time again. Wish the scenery would change!
wonderful!

helena

Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada
3 posted 2000-04-18 11:33 AM


That was a really powerfull poem.  Keep up the good work.

Shandelier

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-04-25 06:01 PM


I enjoyed reading this...excellent writing.  James
dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

5 posted 2000-04-25 07:06 PM


Wonderful, it is great to see you standing your ground and fighting.  Never give up and keep that spirit.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-04-26 12:46 PM


Life lessons, from misery to strength of spirit, knowledge gained is worth the fight.
Wonderful and inspiring  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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