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isiskate81
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since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-04-17 05:07 PM




The fire in your eyes,
blazing with rage
Your arm wrapped around me,
Your hit is like a million heartbreaks,

I'm paralyzed with fear,
My love and happiness are gone,
Hate and fear is all I'm left with
tears running down my face

You showed your true colors,
All my trust and love I had is gone,
but my fear and hate remains.  



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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-17 05:14 PM


It's been told to me, that love is truly blind, and a one way bridge that we build.
True colors have always been there.
this displays your true colors of a great heart, the world would loose a large part if you closed it up.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-17 07:52 PM


yes love can be blind, but its also true that many people know how to hide their true colors well...this is a very painful piece..one day the fear and hate will turn into strength, just wait and see.

*HUG*
take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

3 posted 2000-04-18 12:30 PM


thank you for your coments and its true love is blind,  But it doesnt mean love is gone i hate him but i still love him.  
Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada
4 posted 2000-04-18 01:29 PM


It's ok to still love him.  Im sure he wasn't always an ass.  At least you are smart enough to realize that.  Make your peace and move on.

Shandelier

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