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kittyj
Junior Member

since 2000-04-17

Posts 32
CANADA

0 posted 2000-04-17 04:33 PM

You and me
Out here
Where the rain hurts
And the wind
whispers
sinister
alien
messages
To you and me
Out here

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-17 04:41 PM

Welcome to Passions. Good Post, can't wait for the next one

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-04-17 04:51 PM

excellente'!!!!!!!!!! loving this!!!!!!! please, may we have more?

welcome!!!!!! i'm pretty new, too!!!!

*****kynder

quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-04-17 04:52 PM

Me to. Welcome to Dark Passions.
In this poem you do have someone with you, to stand against the alien whispering winds
A good first.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

HelenaJ
Member

since 2000-04-04

Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

4 posted 2000-04-17 08:23 PM

Hey hon. I'm glad you came. I think I have an idea what this was about you'll have to tell me if i'm right. Now that I see how well you write, I should be the embarassed one. This was really excellent kit. I'm off to read more!

j.

The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

5 posted 2000-04-18 09:48 AM

a place i have come
all the earth i roam
the voices in the dark
call to us on winds

as we are here
i see us stand
against the words
like grains of sand

and all we love
we leave again
as the voices
in our heads

stand with me
in the night
as voices say US
WE WILL FIGHT

Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

Shandelier
Junior Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 22
Canada

6 posted 2000-04-18 11:30 AM

Good job! I'd welcome you too but I'm a newbie as well. I wish i could write my thoughts in such few words and get my message across as you do. i tend to go on and on.

Shandelier

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