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Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan

0 posted 2000-04-16 03:08 PM



I once looked into your eye,
looked deep inside your eyes,
to decant my debility,
to deface capability,
to decipher the mystery,
and deduce melancholy.

I glance dee a while,
then summed up a profile,
of truth and true then,
Smiled.

I heard the unuttered whisper,
I saw the unseen clipper,
I smelled the odorless fragrant,
I felt the untouched senses,
I dived into dried rivers,
I showered the waterless bath,
I fancied the reality,
and sanctured my trellis of thoughts.

I wanted to qoute your eyes,
and ope' the secrets alive,
but the fledge shuddered my circle of expression and I........

though not able to drown,
still not able to fathom,
the magnitude of attraction,
the seriousness of thoughts
the firmness of expression,
the affection, the Love,

Listen!
I may not whisper, I may not speak,
but,
I shall answer you 'MY LOVE'
with my eyes open for you to dive deep.

                   ((((  dedicated to someone really ESPEACIAL !!!!  ))))


 

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-16 03:57 PM


This must be someone special. to go where no one has, to dive into the unknown, to swim the unswimable.
To the depths of your friend's needs.
Indeed someone special.
And to answer your love with no spoken words
but opening your soul with your eyes.
Nice.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-16 05:48 PM


to have someone that will  let you travel within the depths of their soul is a beautiful thing, but to be able to let that person do the same thing with you..is something beyond words..not many of us dare let that happen...im glad you have the courage to do so, and that you have found someone so special to do it with. WONDERFUL WORK.


take care  
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan
3 posted 2000-04-16 11:31 PM



Thank You very much my passion mates,
Joel the Wolf and Broken Wings !
Thank you so very much for the ecstatic appreciation of me and my love.
I do need such words of encouragement .
Keep in touch,
Take Care
Zunera.

 

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-16 11:43 PM


One word 'Beautiful!'  Hope that special someone appreciates this wonderous loving piece  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Zunera
Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 30
Pakistan
5 posted 2000-04-17 03:26 AM


Thank you so very much Isis for one word appreciation.
I do hope so that that someone too appreciates the piece.

Take Care
Zunera

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