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0 posted 2000-04-16 12:35 PM


A boy has dreamed his own death,
at least he had choices,
but not good ones unfortunately,
He was seeing hell in the burning fire pits,
filled with lost soul,
lost forever in eternal blaze.




 Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-16 02:40 AM


I've dreamed of dyeing many times.
And that Dantie's inferno, I've been there.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Broken Wings
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since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-16 05:17 PM


just the other day i dreamed of my own death and i didn't feel the happiness everyone talks about. i was in a room filled with people that had empty eyes and somehow i knew that i was on my way to hell. sigh

take care *HUG*
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-16 08:49 PM


Good heavens what a debate this could be.  Death is never good in some respects, you do see the pain of those you left behind, before making the journey to your rewards.  I would probably end up being a ghost for I wouldn't want to leave my loved ones behind.
I don't like the thought of dying, even if surrounded by family, you still die alone.
Death is a scary thing to me...
Wonderful work  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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