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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
This piece does have a title but I'm afraid it gives too much away. And I know this is my third today. I don't mean to be selfish. It's just nice to be able to finally share my thoughts with others. So thanks for listening. Lying beside the still life body Breathing heaving body Plotting an escape Escape from the humiliation Escape from my shame Escape from the hurt left by his thrust Imobilized Remaining Starring at another numbers face I feel as though I have to justify this one though I wouldn't know where to begin so I guess you may take it as it is. The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Helena, you need to justify nothing here. This poem was excellent. And that's what this Forum is for... sharing our emotion with others. Michael |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh dear helena... you need to explain no further... i know exactly how you feel & what you are talking about(i think) kinda on the same lines of my dopedealer poem, isn't it!! i would like to email you if you need to talk. trust me girl i feel ya. you can email me as well..... kaydogK@netscape.net!!! i'll listen any time!!! *****kynder quote: |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Helena Michael is right! We air all our dirty linen here and no one is judgemental  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God knows I've aired mine. haha and yes no need. You are as you are.? Can you except me as I am ???. then that's your answer. Love you kid. and you can E me also. any time. joel@goldrush.com Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
I`m sorry Helena but the only selfish one here is me ,you had more poetry but you only posted three! More,More,More hehe ilove your work Helena and no justifications are necessary,the beauty that is in you comes out in your writing for all to see and that`s justification enough. |
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Shandelier Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22Canada |
i admire you helena for being able to share something that is obviously very personal. no justification needed here. |
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