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HelenaJ
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since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-04-15 04:07 PM


                Tears in silent thoughts
                Echo with each fall
                A memory left behind
                A love thought felt
                Denial at the core of it all
                Eating away at the whole
                The being that once was
                standing tall
                Now withered and alone
                Small and fragil
                Broken by words
                Shattered by wants
                Held by needs
                Kept from feeling

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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-15 04:28 PM


Thank you for your post on my Poem.
This poem are my nights, you must drift to my thoughts.
Very haunting.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
2 posted 2000-04-16 03:16 AM


Strong emotion done so well,i liked this one
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