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xEmperorEmber
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since 03-28-2000
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0 posted 04-15-2000 02:50 PM       View Profile for xEmperorEmber   Email xEmperorEmber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit xEmperorEmber's Home Page   View IP for xEmperorEmber

I am all but fitting
You are all the rage
Listing all my pity
You take none of my pain

And yet here I fall
Just as numb as before
For you glances I crawl
I slip slightly more


The light on a dark canvas
Has just left me dead
Leaving all that we made us
For days I bled

say you will...
say you cant...
just give up...
and let me stand...

Tommarrow always brings a new day
Left surrounded but hallow
Forever this eternal price I will pay
God I feel so shallow
© Copyright 2000 Paul Watley - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 1341
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1 posted 04-15-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

"The light on a dark canvas
Has just left me dead
Leaving all that we made us
For days I bled"

God how well I know this.
very good.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Michael
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2 posted 04-15-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Welcome to Dark Passions.  Great first poem.  This seems to fit my mood to a T today too.  Wonderful work, hope to see more from you soon.


Michael
dhuron
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3 posted 04-20-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Welcome to Passions.  This is a wonderful first posting.  
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with you


4 posted 04-21-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

xE~ Welcome to Passions!   this is a great first post! Will look for more from you.-SEA
Virgin Su´cide
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since 08-11-2000
Posts 321
Netherlands


5 posted 09-07-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for Virgin Su´cide   Email Virgin Su´cide   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Virgin Su´cide's Home Page   View IP for Virgin Su´cide

really really good Emperor!
I dunno, just like love your style of writing!

love, Virgin Su´cide...



"I love the way you love, but I hate the way, I'm supposed to love you back..."

Love is hard to live...
Try to live life in love....
eegood
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Posts 41
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6 posted 09-07-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for eegood   Email eegood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eegood

simply commanding...
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