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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-04-15 01:26 PM




I need someone to be my friend
I have not much to offer, just me
I have my trusting heart, often called naive
Been hurt and shunned so many times

I am not the pick of the crop
Just me, looking and wanting someone
Accept me for who I am.
I have no references to give you

All I have is my Heart
Wounded so many times,
but I have hope that I will
Find someone one day, someone that cares

I am not gold or even silver
I am merely common
Not a sought after precious jewel
Just plain gravel in comparison

I am just meager, but still feel
Looking for someone to call Friend
Find someone to travel this world with
Someone to take me as is, no warranty
or money back guarantee. As I am




 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31

1 posted 2000-04-15 01:48 PM


I have the same feelings too.  Its great how you can express them.  Great work. If you need a friend you can always count on me.  BYE!!!!!!!
HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
2 posted 2000-04-15 01:50 PM


Though I have not much more to offer, I'm always more than happy to offer my friendship. I'm sure you'll find your perfect friend who'll take you as is.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-15 04:43 PM


My friend, our paths will cross going up the MT. And we will shake hands.
Joel. PS very gool.  HHHHOOOOWWWWWLLLL.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

4 posted 2000-04-16 01:01 AM


thanks everyone for the replies. Means alot to me!!

Daniel

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-04-16 01:10 AM


Dhuron...
first let me say good poem and then let me say...it's "so" how i feel right now...
great one...
see you around

Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada
6 posted 2000-04-16 07:36 PM


wow,,,, that was a great poem.  you took the words right out of my mouth.  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-04-16 11:38 PM


Well Daniel what are you waiting for, email me!!!  I'm serious, you can never have enough friends.  I know exactly how you feel.

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
8 posted 2000-04-16 11:44 PM


my dear friend... who would want more than such honesty and trustworthiness?  i for one, am apalled that people where you live are so blind to the person before them.  i need only read your words, it must shine on your face.

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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