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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-15 01:03 AM



This isn`t dark but you know, i feel more at home here so here goes...

Stuff

Beautiful, bright
rainbow light

like the sun on the water
and the smell of a rose

the sounds of the morning
cool sand between your toes

that first sip of wine

how you felt as a child,waking up on saturday
and realizing there was no school

a hot summer day and you just dove in the pool

singing in time to your favorite song
being with your family,feeling you belong

a babies hand that squeezes your finger
a lover`s scent that seems to linger

when someone says i love you
and you say i love you too

the color porsche red
and my favorite...ocean blue

rain on your tongue
and the sound crystal makes

the smell of sunday school
and the bread your grandma bakes

the laughter of a child
and you when you smile.


                


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sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
1 posted 2000-04-15 01:10 AM


This poem is just really cool, Nameless!
I got this feeling of calm and euphoria while reading it, your words just brought me to every image. Love it.
Keep up the great work!

sKiTtLeS~

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-15 09:31 AM


This reminds me of one I did, called "What I'd miss". I'll post it soon.
But in this dark this is a good light.
We need to peak out every now and then.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-04-19 10:58 PM


Nameless~ I do so love this! Very nice and heart warming! -SEA
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-04-21 12:45 PM


what a blessing to be able to write kinda light and kinda dark.  hope you are able to post soon.  miss your work!!!!  

*****kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

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