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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-04-14 08:16 PM



Throbbing heart shall you quiet to mend?

Shall you convert  the questions of my aching heart and uncleansed mind to pure answers given in time?

So many unanswerd souls thinking that just because they are left without words that they will never learn the truth to life

So many great minds and loving hearts expecting to return to life that they have left...they will not give the effort to go back

Leaving one and moving to the next broken heart the sun follows only those who drag it

Hearing the crys of mislead souls

Feeling the frozen hearts of those who waited for people to listen to their silence

Loving deep within ones self? Think one crazy first!

The only soul that listens would be you own...prate to thyself? How else can one speak truth of all? Else might you hurt others feelings...with what little of egos they might have you can undo in one shove


 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-14 09:09 PM


In one word you can kill hopes, dreams, loves, and lives.
And yes we can speak the truth to our selves. But do we hear it?
This is unnerving and good.
Joel. Thank you.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-04-15 01:03 AM


Almost has a shakespearen feel to it too, good work Tan Angel  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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