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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.

0 posted 2000-04-14 11:31 AM




Calling your name out,
To the sky.
I think aloud,
And I wonder why.

I wonder where,
You were that day.
When a cold heartless man,
Turned me away.

It couldn't have been you,
I've been over this before.
When you told me goodbye,
my jaw hit the floor.

Denial controls me,
I can't deny this.
It must've been you,
And you I will miss.


 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-14 08:35 PM


Short and to the point.
I liked it.
They do seem like strangers.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
2 posted 2000-04-15 12:44 PM


Wow great little poem, and just when you think you know someone...
sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
3 posted 2000-04-15 12:49 PM


Thanks guys, we all know it's all about getting trough the pain of realization.

sKiTtLeS~

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

Sven
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4 posted 2000-04-15 10:25 PM


Yes it is, my friend. . . and I hope that you have. . . excellent poem!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
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