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who what am i him or he
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who what am i him or he |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Just a life All you hold everything is in me Just a voice inside me hold me Close now Log me in Load me up just a clone stolen crown Now we see All of me Speaks out lieing down How do you What are I All alone in the sky Race on by All rely on the place behind the eye Call to me My own mind love deep I let fly Now i see as i cry i sink low now i die Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
An interesting way of putting it. I like the bouncing, and what was left unsaid. Good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this one is as perfect as the other... love the flow and rhythm. who are you? what are you? (the title asks) I do believe you are a poet yes indeed...I know it (smile) take care my poetic friend, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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