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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-04-14 07:38 AM


The wall of sound
travels around
as your voice
and meaning crowd

All the space
In my mind
is all drowned
come to me now

I hear you still
In colours shrill
and all your heart
that night untill

Your words resound
A wall of sound
in my mind unabound
And I am with you again



  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-04-14 09:02 AM


Dear Mr. Poe...
never ceasing to amaze me...
and amazing me is a feat within itself!
To me you have an unbelievable ability to put words together and make them into the most beautiful whispers there are.....


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-14 09:17 AM


Another interesting way about it.
Amazing.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-04-14 10:45 AM


Walter,
this is so very lovely...
poetic perfection.
I love seeing this side of your poetry.
your shining in the darkness, as always.
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-04-15 02:31 PM


this is beautiful. Amazing flow.

 Kathleen


NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
5 posted 2000-04-15 02:46 PM


very cool,yes i liked this one.Thanks for sharing.
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