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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Here is my first assignment from the poetry workshop. Hope ya'll like*S* It warms us in the middle of a cold night. Fills are being with warmth, cradles us. The Fire within our hearts breathes life The Fire is wondrous Alluring to the heart and Soul We all want to Find the Fire to be engulfed by the fire Yet beware, Fire is of Nature Being both Good and Bad The Fire can Warm and Heal, but just the same it can Burn We all search for the fire needing the fire to fills us I await to fill the warmth The comfort of Love The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
This is great. I like the line "Yet beware, Fire is of Nature, Being both Good and Bad" because it is so true. Well done. Without darkness there is no light Without the light we cannot see the dark Balance...It heals the soul -- by: LB |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
yes i really liked the line "the fire can warm and heal but just the same it can burn" guess it just depends on what we do with it. Great stuff dhuron |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your poem was wonderful. Kathleen |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ this is so good, I enjoyed reading this!!  -SEA |
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