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~ It's Time~

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SEA
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0 posted 04-12-2000 06:20 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


Even though you told me
it was time for you to leave
my mind refuses
to understand or believe

Everyone keeps telling me
girl, you've got to move on
but I can't convince my heart
that you've really gone

You were my friend, my lover
the other half of my soul
I'll never find a way
to fill this empty hole

How will I ever be able
to hold anyone new
when my body still aches
to be touched by you.
-SEA-


This was an old one.... not a reflection of today  
© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
ShadowHeart
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1 posted 04-12-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for ShadowHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShadowHeart

This was AWESOME!  I can now say that I can relate to this poem.  Great job!

<3 shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength.

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2 posted 04-12-2000 06:30 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

ShadowHeart~ thanks!   -SEA
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3 posted 04-12-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Good work Sea!  Even if it is an oldie, the ache lessens in time as you know..  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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4 posted 04-12-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Wonderful Post SEA.  Old but still great

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
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5 posted 04-12-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

I know all to well these feelings.
I'm glad it's an old one.
But thank you for today.
Joel.
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Isis~ thanks!

Dhuron~ thank you!  

Joel~ thank you!
-SEA
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7 posted 04-12-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Great poem!
Describes feelings that I believe everyone's gone through. It's nice when you can relate to other peoples work.

~sKiTtLeS~
NamelessOne
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8 posted 04-13-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for NamelessOne   Email NamelessOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NamelessOne

Great writing SEA ,i know where you`re coming from err came from and glad it`s behind you  
tracie66
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9 posted 04-13-2000 06:01 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sea~
This was soo sad and brought back memories, hon it will take awhile but it does slowly get better.
HUGS
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


10 posted 12-01-2004 03:56 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This brought tears to my eyes...you said it's old, not a reflection of your today: i am glad. For me it is exactly today. It hurts and this poem says it so beautifully.
*hug*,
Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

 
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