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ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
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0 posted 2000-04-12 05:03 PM


When I tell you that I love you,
you say, 'oh that's nice.'
When I tell you I can't live without you,
you say, 'oh that's nice.'

When I asked you if you loved me
you said, 'only as a friend.'
When I asked you if you couldn't live without me
you said, 'only as a friend.'

Why is it that I give my heart
To someone who won't give theirs?
Why is it that I love someone
Who barely even cares?



 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

© Copyright 2000 ShadowHeart - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-04-12 05:12 PM


Lovely writing..and I know why I give my heart...James
ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

2 posted 2000-04-12 05:16 PM


Thanks!  I know why I give my heart to...I was just questioning my judgement...

 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-12 07:26 PM


wonderful Poem Shadow,

I have been in this situation before, how painful it truly is.

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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with you
4 posted 2000-04-12 07:39 PM


ShadowHeart~ it is such a fustrarting situation to be in.....my heart goes out to you.-SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-12 09:11 PM


It is the nature of our beast.
I'm there now.
love
Joel.  hahah see.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

6 posted 2000-04-19 06:08 PM


thanks to everyone!  you all have a way to lift my spirits.

 Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength.


TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-04-19 07:20 PM


I understand the emotion and the pain only too well...I hope you can find peace soon...

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

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