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Bumble Bee Stew |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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You wouldn't believe the Mom I've got, skipping by I ask What's cookin' in the pot? Smiling she says, Why, it's Bumble Bee Stew I'm making it special my girl, just for you Are you crazy Mom?! Or just going mad Bumble Bee Stew I surely have never had My silly girl It's a witch's brew every young witch loves Bumble Bee Stew Well how do you make it? Can you tell me that? And if I'm a young witch dear Mom, where ever is my hat? A young witch does not wear a hat my child did you forget your little black cat? I have a black cat yes, this is true but Mom, how do you make Bumble Bee Stew? It's a secret one day I'll share with you, and together we'll make Bumble Bee Stew. -SEA- |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
intresting thme...very well written... rhyming..and simple but sweet.. If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is precious. makes me want to show it to my mom!!!!!!! brings smiles!!! good for you!!! kynder quote: |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Avanti~ thanks...  Kynder~ My daughter inspired this, we were writting together yesterday and she said something about Mom and got....I was in the kitchen and didn't catch all she said but this poem started brewing so fast I had to write it down! Makes me think of my Mom too...  -SEA |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
This was cute! I liked the rhyming beat that it followed! Great Job! <3 shadow Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ShadowHeart~ thanks! I had fun with this. -SEA |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
This was fun to read SEA!! The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Me too. I danced with the tempo. A lighter heart, is good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ I'm glad it was! thank you! Joel~ thanks! -SEA |
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