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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-12 04:02 AM




Quicksilver Days


The sky china blue
with not a ripple on the sea
it feels good to be alive
a wholeness of me

the kind of day that takes you back
to when everything was new
and there was wonder in the world
and there was right
and there was true

We must savor days as such
and pause for life`s simple joys
a smile from a happy child
and a home that hasn`t been destroyed

These days are like mercury in your hand
handle them carefully
and watch them shine

But dare to blink
and what seemed solid
will run away
with no hope again to find

so console yourself with the fact
that what doesn`t change
is change
and live your life
to love your life
before there are no more
quicksilver days


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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-04-12 07:10 AM


I love the words "quicksilver days"
I'll hold onto this one today.
thanks for writing it.

 Kathleen


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-04-12 07:45 AM


NamelessOne~
This was a lovley poem
Enjoyed it
Tracie~    


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-12 11:46 AM


Very lovey poem

A very good read

Daniel



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-04-12 12:01 PM


here's to you for grabbing on2 the good times & not letting the darkness cause it all to go to gray.  God bless.

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.


SEA
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5 posted 2000-04-12 12:49 PM


Nameless~ this is great! I like it very much. -SEA
NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
6 posted 2000-04-12 04:17 PM


thank you my friends i`m glad you all liked it.
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-04-12 10:04 PM


Very up lifting.
And very good.
Joel

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Richter_9
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since 2000-04-09
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Whereever I happen to be at the time
8 posted 2000-04-13 12:34 PM


I enjoyed this poem immensly, though I think my quicksilver days are far behind me.  True, change is probably the only thing that never changes.

Rich

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