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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-04-11 09:49 PM


My heart is hurting beyond words,
The pain is tearing up my soul,
Please tell me how can I find,
The life that all this saddness stole?

It's you who should feel guilty,
Because of you my heart is dead,
It's blood is on your hands,
I'm not feeling right in the head.

Did this fill you with glee?
To kill my fragile soul,
Did that ease your suffering,
Or help you with your goal?

All your anger will poison you yet,
Unless you just let it go,
I'm lost and confused but I understand,
This once beloved soul has been slained by your hand.

I feel all alone, betrayed and adrift,
Maybe this loss can be viewed as a gift,
For now I've found the true strength in me,
You've given me the gift to see the true love  in me.

Come friends and melt with me,
Unleash the power of your own destiny,
Take your life forces and mould them into one,
The world will be better when our work is done.

Let the music of love with it's lustful refrain,
Arouse us to heights with a passionate strain,
Imagine how awesome this new life will be,
Come friends and sing with me.....


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-04-11 10:59 PM


Isis~ I am melting with you and I will help you sing your song(but I'll sing real quiet as it would scare the heck out of you-LOL)This is a wonderful poem.   -SEA
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-11 11:05 PM


wow ISIS-girl...
you and that inspired muse of oyur have been kicking out the poems here of late and they all are so powerful...
this is EXCELLENT!!!
your gift is your poetry...it is your destiny(smile)
take care sweet one
jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Isis
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-12 12:48 PM


Sea any voice that sings this song of love and hope is welcome.
Janet Marie, do you ever say an unkind word?
Thanks hon.
                               

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-12 01:28 AM


Isis. I'll sing a howwwlll tonight till the neighbors wake up. hahaha
Your heart does sing fair maiden. and your spirit is mixed with ours.
So sing with your heart's content, we of the passions, sing with you in chorus with one knee bent.
Joel.

NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
5 posted 2000-04-12 02:24 AM


From sadness to bitterness to joyful song
,what a ride! Thank you Isis for sharing a part of your life with us.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-04-12 07:38 AM


Isis~
Sad but then at the end a peace.

All your anger will poisen you yet
unless you let it go~
So true, if you keep on hating, despising and hurting someone, you end up being all alone and lifeless, you have nothing left on the inside or on the outside.

Great poem
Tracie~



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-04-12 08:30 AM


I only speak the truth  
jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2000-04-12 08:32 AM


And I will find roses to place in the moonlight as Joel howls. This was beautiful

 Kathleen


ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

9 posted 2000-04-12 05:49 PM


Very Beautiful!  Joel was right when he said, "...we of passions sing with you...", cuz we do!  Loved the poem!  It seems like everyone's getting their hearts broken lately...hope your's feels better.

<3 shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

Isis
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Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-04-12 07:01 PM


Thanks so much everyone!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

11 posted 2000-04-12 07:18 PM


Wonderful Isis

Such Depth and Power, I will try and sing along  

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
12 posted 2000-04-13 12:57 PM


It's sort of song like isn't it??

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
13 posted 2000-04-13 01:09 AM


Yes it is Isis. . . wonderful words. . .sing loud my friend. . . let your voice be heard!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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